NEVER ENDS PERFECT

Aamra gets up from her bed with a bad dream and hastens towards her mothers bed room.Holds her mother tight and gets into a peacful slepp.In the morning.she gets into a quarrel with her mom about increasing her allowances,movie nights and other issues which teengers always complain about.Aamra gets a straight and stern reply from her mother and she stabs the bowl of beakfast onto the dining table and eats her food grudging.
As she grows up her feelings towards her mother worsens as cruel intentions person(AAMRA MOM AND DAD ARE SEPARATED IN HER CHILDHOOD AND AAMRA GREW UP AS FEELING OF HER MOTHER AS CULPRIT IN LIVING AWAY FROM HER MOTHER)She grew up into indeed into a successful business woman who never allowed her mother to be one of her closest persons to share her feelings of happiness,rejoice,sadness and prblems.
One day she receives a call from a hospital that her mother is admitted in a hospital and she was counting her time for life and her last wish was to meet her daughter.Aamra drops her phones receiver in perfect silense and runs like hell to meet her dying mother.when she sees her mother laying on the hospital bed with a face showing tiredness of her struggle of her life,work and pain she experienced in her whole life in upbringing of her life support(her child). Her mothers last spoken words "I LOVE U MY CHILD WITH ALL MY HEART" and with these words she drops into eternity silence still on the bed with a smile and happiness in her glowing face with an expression of acheving a great thing in her life.Her pierces Aamra's soul like a spear.
After some days Aamra is playing with kids of orphanage and smiling at them and tears flow from her eyes ahining as perals on her cheeks.She looks into the pool of water in which she observes her mothers impression which was blur turned into clear one now.It was a penance of her deeds for neglecting and misunderstanding her mothers LOVE towards her by giving her love towards her mother to these children.
I END THE STORY WITH A HOPE OF NEVER TRYING TO CONCEDE OR EXPRESS YUOR FEELINGS EVEN THEY ARE BAD ARE GOOD TO THAT PERSON AND TRY NOT GROW ENVY TOWARDS ANY PERSON AND HAVE A PEACEFULE LIFE AND END IN A SATISFACTION OF ACHEVING SOMETHING AND LOVE FROM OTHERS.
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A wonderful theme..
ReplyDeleteI see you linger between short forms and a few spell errors.. There are a few grammatical mistakes too.. Of course, a review will get it all fine..
I think the story is looking an effort between a poem and a story. Actually it needn't be a poem to express anything, a short brief story can be even more effective.. Its all about words and the depth to it..the rest will come by itself..